Indignation
The racism is something that i hate. I hate that people make differences with persons just por their skin. All of us are persons, and that it's the important, ¿Why matter the color of your skin?, ¿Why?
It's just stupid think that something like that can make us differents one of another, and especially take that opinion and build something like the slavery. For years the slavery it was the system of a racism society, that stipulated who is better than another, just for the color of the skin.
The racism makes me sad, makes me angry and makes me powerless, because sometimes I think that I can not do anything, but that's not true, because there's a lot of things that I can do, that WE, like young People, we can do. We can give love to the stranger, we can help the foreigner, we can put us in his side, accept their culture and respect it.
We can change the world and live like brothers, like childrens of the earth, and love one and other. whatever is our skin's color, or feautures, we are persons.

I totally agree. We must move towards the development of a world that puts tolerance and respect above all social principles.
ResponderEliminar
ResponderEliminarRacism is also very indignant and in Chile racism goes hand in hand with classism which makes me feel sad too
On the overall the text hangs out well, and the message is quite clear. You ought to check on the following details to enhance coherence:
ResponderEliminarCorrectons:
The racism= Racism
that i hate= that I hate
¿Why matter the color of your skin?, ¿Why?= Why would skinf colour matter?, Why?
It's just stupid think= It's just stupid to think
years the slavery it was the system of a racism society= years slavery was the system of a racist society
The racism makes me sad= Racism makes me sad
we can put us in his side= we van be on their side
T: 3, L: 2, G: 2= 7 pts.
GRADE: 5.5